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Friday 16 September 2016

Ryder the dragon

Once upon a time there was a draoN caLLeD Ryder and Live in a scary castLe. One day Ryder saw a Beautiful girl draoN and they played tag with their frieNd's. Next the witches of Eastwick saw Ryder and took him to the village of farmers. Then He raced away to the Giants Land. Suddenly a huge giant saw Ryder and a witch come to take him. Finally Ryder went to his scary castle and had a play and had a happy day.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Eva it's Danielle here. Hey I love your story about Ryder the dragon. Hey maybe you can work on your capital letters, but your story is fantastic. I really like how you explained where Ryder lives in the first sentence. Love your story Eva so keep up the amazing writing

    Danielle

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